Final Presentation Feedback
I got very insightful feedback on my final presentation, from guest critics Jonathan Soma and Colleen Macklin.
Engagement
Testing with people outside the program might be helpful and open up more avenues for improvement and engagement.
Think about the audience interacting with this, and what space they are coming into.
People will come up with logic even if there isn't any.
What would sustained engagement look like?
Movement
Adding more easy movement would help.
Arms going up and down is intuitive too, so some reaction to that.
Can they replicate something on screen?
Visuals
The visuals could have given more context.
People want to see mirrors of themselves.
Music
The music sounds very natural.